Frame #1 made me chuckle -- continuous, carnival barker patter is really something. Steven Millhauser takes this exact voice in some of his short fiction and it somehow works... as someone once said of lawyer Saul Goodman 'they ought to put your mouth in the circus'
Chiasms in chiasms — formally and creatively, this was a good one!
Enjoyed this.
Frame #1 made me chuckle -- continuous, carnival barker patter is really something. Steven Millhauser takes this exact voice in some of his short fiction and it somehow works... as someone once said of lawyer Saul Goodman 'they ought to put your mouth in the circus'
Well done.
Thank you!